Thursday, November 18, 2010

Proposal

 Bounded Women
 Ama Ata Aidoo’s No Sweetness Here consists of a multitude of short stories that illuminate the set boundaries on a woman’s potential. Due to the patriarchal society in these stories, it is very difficult for a woman to seek a success of her own. Therefore, a woman has to rely on the success of her husband and sons in order to attain some form of status in her community. In “ Something to Talk About on the Way to the Funeral”  Auntie Araba leads a life of character and hard work ,however,  society does not give any validity to the success of women and judges her solely on the actions of her troubled son.  In “Two Sisters”, Mercy is so disillusioned with the opportunities a woman can attain on her own that she does not seek out her own success but instead engages in relationships with powerful men. Lastly, in “No Sweetness Here” Maami Ama works hard for everything that she is given, however, society deems it unlikely that her hard work is what produces her lifestyle and constantly sides with her abusive husband.
In my paper I show the symbiotic relationship between woman and man and demonstrate how that relationship bounds a woman’s potential. Women become enslaved to men as they never seek out their own success but live vicariously through that of their men . By seeking success through that of their sons or husbands they never learn to be self-sufficient and become second class citizens. Therefore, until women are allowed to attain a form of success of their own they will never be equal with men and will be unable to break through the boundaries set on them.

Monday, November 8, 2010

The last chapter

Hey guys! I hope the weekend found you all well. As mentioned before I am currently taking an African Literature course and this week the class read a book titled Foe by J.M. Coetzee. The book is a rewrite of another book titled Robinson Crusoe and this rewrite has some pretty significant changes. For one, in Foe an entirely new character enters the picture by the name of Susan Barton. It is through her eyes that the story of Cruso and Friday are told. This new narrative layer significantly changes the story as one knew it. Although the book is very different one finds themselves adapting to the plot as the book progresses and then one gets to the last chapter and the whole of the book gets flipped on its hope. My hope is that through this post one will gain a better understanding of the ending.
For those of you who have not read Foe allow me to give you a brief synopsis. Foe takes place as Susan Barton is kicked off of a boat heading to Brazil and struggles to reach an island that Cruso and Friday so happen to reside in. She is stranded in that island with Cruso and Friday for a little over year until a boat finally finds them and she then goes back to England. During that trip Cruso dies and so she is left only with Friday whom she “takes care of” during their time in England. Susan wants her story told so she goes to the author Foe to do so. During this time, she lives in absolute poverty and does not get much help from Foe in terms of sustenance. She decides to go on a journey to send Friday back to Africa and in that journey she ends up finding Foe who went into hiding as he owed money to the government. Although, they fight about the plot of the story things appear to be changing for the better for Susan. However, then the ending sends you to this very abstract world and the whole of the plot is brought into question.
In the last chapter, it appears a new character is brought into the picture. He is scanning a house and in the staircase landing he sees what appears to be a woman’s body. As he climbs the staircase he finds Friday and a woman lying next to him. He walks downstairs and sees a plaque in Foe’s honor which gives one the impression that it is Foe’s house. On a table he finds a manuscript. The manuscript appears to be a retelling of Susan’s story. However, this story is different it seems to be told by another person outside of the story. In it this narrator sees a shipwrecked ship he enters it and sees Susan Barton and her dead captain. However, the narrator finds Friday and opens Friday’s mouth. Friday appears to have let a noise out that goes throughout the boat. It looks like this narrator is going to try to release Friday from his slave status and give him a voice as well so the story continues. However, this brings the question is this a retelling of Susan’s story or is it a continuance of her story?
This ending is mind boggling as the introduction of this manuscript shatters Susan’s story and makes one think so what really happened was Susan’s story false or was this ending false. In addition, who is this new character who appears to be fully aware of  who everyone is as demonstrated when coming into this mysterious household as he addresses the body of Friday by its rightful name, “ Kneeling, groping, I find the man Friday stretched at  full length on his back” (154). It is important to note though that although he knows that the body belongs to Friday it appears he only knows this by someone giving him Friday’s description not because he has met Friday. This idea that he knows the characters in this household by someone else’s description is further seen when he is describing Friday breathing, “Then, if I can ignore the beating of my own heart, I begin to hear the faintest faraway roar: as she said, the roar of waves in a seashell; and over that, as if once or twice a violin-string were touched, the whine of the wind and the cry of a bird” (154).  Who is this person and why is he entering what appears to be Foe’s house? Is he the narrator of that new manuscript? Did he read Susan’s manuscript and then did the narrative just shift to his retelling?
However, what is most important is not who this person is but what he does which is introducing the manuscript that retells the story of Foe which is already retelling the story known as Robin Crusoe. This only furthers the message that I think Coetzee is trying to exemplify which is the many ways a story can be told. Each story somewhat achieving a new perspective and information to what really happened but each giving very different perspectives.
  This ending brings about many questions. It introduces new characters and does not explain them, a new way of retelling a story and no explanation to why it is so different, and it also exemplifies what a mysterious character Friday is. I do not think this ending really goes hand in hand with Foe that seemed to be resolving all the questions that were brought about in the beginning of the novel, but it is most definitely an interesting way to end it.